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Chronic mental illness may be extremely difficult for family units to handle given the adverse

social stigmas, which exist regarding the disease in most communities across the globe today.

Chronic severe mental illness in family members could result in almost constant monitoring

and care, depending on the intensity and the illness.

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Most of the literature that surrounds mental illnesses in the families is psychology based. In

addition, there is a resilient need for communication-based explorations to better comprehend

such families.

This thesis is telling that most of the literature is psychology-based, and what is needed to understand

the topic. It doesn’t really tell what your sources revolve on, Sharada. Remember that a literature

review is organized based on the ideas from the sources and not the sources themselves. Since the

thesis needs to express clearly what the paper is about, you need to make sure that it carries the

central idea of your sources. What is the theme about chronic mental illnesses that you want to focus

on in this literature review? What are issues that connect the ideas of your sources together? What

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Recent studies about bigamy show that people are starting to accept this phenomenon as a

subject worthy of academic consideration.

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