My instructor wrote on the side what is wrong. My question is can anyone help with the study? My topic is mentioned and is accepted. Please follow the instructors 'areas to change' and help with this. Please leave the boxes as they are...there isn't anything for someone to do there. This is what my instructor said I should do with this material. our writing (you need to begin to learn to write for research and not for writing a clinical paper) Using the empirical literature to identify the gap Alignment Again, pls. review other empirical research studies that have been published in peer-reviewed journals and note the tone and style of writing by other authors.